Dream With Me
CONTENT: For the most part, you tell what you did in your day and things that you are planning for the future. It's interesting at times because you seem to have a simplistic way of looking at things, and it's easy to follow along in your writings. You have great spelling and grammar, but the eye-catchingness in your content needs some improvement. I wasn't necessarily bored reading your entries, but maybe that's because I really couldn't relate to your life and the events that happen in it. At some times you talk about what you think and feel, and that's what I look for, but I think it would be better if you went into more inner detail. I like the 'currently reading and listening to' parts. (28/40)
LAYOUT: I really like your layout, it's simple but unique. You made the template yourself, which gives you extra points. Everything is organized and color-coded and working properly- you even made all your rings look the same! The imood, Clix, and stat counter are all positioned in a good place. Overall, your layout is great. (23/20)
EMOTIONS: There were some emotions, but you only really talked about the outter layer of them. This and this are entries where you went more into your inside emotions than some other entries, but sharing your more deeper thoughts would help this score. (10/20)
EXTRAS: Plenty for me to read and keep me busy: disclaimer, bio, cast, reviews, rings, reads, quizzes, Clix. (10/10)
LINK: Wow you really have a lot of reviews going on! But nevertheless, I could find the link to our site and it works fine. (5/5)
CONTACT: aim, guestbook, e-mail, notes, all within easy reach. (5/5)
TOTAL SCORE: 81/100
Fave Entry: This one. I just found it interesting and funny; it was somewhat different from the previous entries.
Fave Quote:"Too bad being covered in wallpaper paste isn't the big fashion trend right now. Everyone would think I was damn sexy." Hahaha!
Comments: This diary really has potential to be more of a diary than a journal/daily log. Of course, it is your diary, so you don't need to change your writing style for anyone, but to help this review, it needed to be a little more deep. Good luck.
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Reviewed by: Linda