disco party!!!!!!!!!!!
Content:
You have good grammar and well punctuated sentences, but your entries are quite a bore sometimes. A lot of your entries talk about your day. As a reviewer, I need something with more passion and thoughts.
In this entry you show a lot of love and passion. It shows how much you love your daughter and how much you love spending time with her. I would love to read more entries like that one.
Some of your entries contain a lot of opinions and stuff. For example this one, I like how you talked about your opinions on religion, it shows that you are very smart. Also, This entry shows that you are very open minded because you live in Canada and still care about Fourth of July.
You have many skips, but a lot of the time when you update, you write a good amount. (35/40)
Layout: WOW!!! The first time I saw the layout, I was in total awe. It�s so cool how it changes colors. Such a neat layout goes to daisy designs. The links on the bottom are very simple, and your archives page is well organized.(20/20)
Emotions: Some of your entries talk about your days and others are about your thoughts, but once in a while you would put in some emotions.
In this entry you show how much you love and care for your husband.(15/20)
Extras: You have a cast page, 101 things, tests�n�fun� and that�s about it?(8/10)
Link: It�s there now, but it took you a while to put it up. (3/5)
Contact: You have a guestbook and notes. You should try AIM or e-mail.(2/5)
Total: (83/100)
Extra:
Favorite Entry: This was a very funny entry about MTV�s �Becoming.�
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Comments: You�re a good writer, you should just try to put more enthusiasm into it.
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Reviewed by:: Thi