One Left Turn Too Many
Content: This diary isn�t just the ramblings of a normal life. Your diary has content that can inspire people. Not only that you are descriptive, as in this entry and this entry, where in the latter, you included quotes which helped the reader understand what you were writing about, but also this entry showed so much of your self honesty and that is something not everyone can achieve by. You are, in fact, very consistent in your entries, and at times humorous, as in the narration of this entry.
Also, this was good. At times you like to write in the second person and I like that. It isn�t necessary to write a diary in the first person all the time, and by writing about yourself as �you�, you can generally see yourself from an outsiders� point of view. Good work.
Content Score: 32/40
Layout: Basically, the layout is quite good. I didn�t really like the images by the left, but I liked the way the pages change from left to right. That was amazing. The truth is, I didn't entirely like your layout. It isn't something I would like. The navigation was a little hard to read. Some of the extra stuff can be grouped together. It wasn�t entirely organized.
Layout Score: 12/20
Emotions: At the beginning, you narrate more about your life. That was good, but later, when you brought your emotions in, that was what that really captured me. In fact, from your diary, you show people that you can be a very passionate person. This entry and this entry revealed your emotions of anger and frustration and loneliness. You can, on the whole, write a lot more about emotions that can inspire people.
Emotions Score: 15/20
Extras: Trading Card, profile, bio, reviews, games, wishlist, you have ever so many.
Extras Score: 12/10
Links: They�re all working, but there are some older entries in which the �next� was linked, not to the next entry, but to the index page.
Links Score: 4/5
Contacts: Guestbook, notes, AIM, guestmap and Email.
Contact Score: 5/5
Total Score: 80/100 You are eligible to join the Silver Ring
Extras:
Favourite Entry: This and this were the entries I liked.
Favourite Quote: You like snow but only if it's warm. You like rain but only if it's dry. No sentimental value to the rose that fell on your floor. No fundamental excuse for the granted I'm taken for. It�s poetic, and beautiful.
Comments: You have a lot of talent in writing. When you originally started out, it wasn�t as good, but it improved so much throughout the short weeks you wrote this diary. A pleasure to read your diary.
Reviewed by: Charlene