Mommy, why can't I eat crayons?
CONTENT: I like this entry. I could relate to that feeling of just wanting to be friends, and the other party just doesn't quite get it. Pretty uncomfortable! You handled it much better than I would have! This was interesting! Ouch! Cool, though. Overall, I really like your entries because I feel like you are actually talking to me, and not trying to be someone else. You are very natural, and I think that's a gift. It is great when someone can write, totally be themselves, and hold the reader's interest. You have a lot of talent.
Content Score: 40/40
LAYOUT: You layout is excellent. It is clean, cute, and very easy to navigate. There's no clutter. Perfect job.
Layout Score: 22/20
EMOTIONS: You did a wonderful job of conveying your emotions! This was especially apparent in your rebuttals to some of the reviews! I was cracking up! You're good!
Emotions Score: 20/20
EXTRAS: Excellent job on including extras: rings, reviews, quizzes, surveys, drawings, swap, chat, designs, (you're an awesome designer, by the way!). Also, an area where readers can link to you, recommend you, and add you as a favorite. Really cool cast page that includes pictures of your "charcters". So many extras, and they are all quality.
Extras Score: 15/10
LINK: Yep, it's there...takes me here. Perfecto.
Link Score: 5/5
CONTACT: Email, guestbook, and AIM.
Contact Score: 5/5
TOTAL SCORE: 107/100 You may join the Platinum Ring You'll also be added as one of our favorite diaries. :)
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EXTRA
Favorite Entry:"Dorks in Action".
Favorite Quote:"A fart can be quiet,
A fart can be loud,
Some leave a powerful,
poisonous cloud... *wearing a mask on*
A fart can be short,
or a fart can be long,
Some farts have been known
to sound just like a song... *on a bench with a cowboy hat and a guitar*
A fart can create
a most curious medley,
A fart can be harmless,
or silent, but deadly... X-P
A fart might not smell,
while others are vile,
a fart may pass quickly,
or linger a while... *covering nose*
A fart can occur
in a number of places,
And leave everyone
with strange looks on their faces... 9__6
From wide-open prairie,
to small elevators,
A fart will find all of us
sooner or later... @__o
But not all farts are bad,
this is simply not true-
We mustn't forget...
dear, old fart heads like YOU! :D"
Comments: You are definately "a unique"! I really enjoyed your diary!
Reviewed by: Leslie Irene