The Kill
Content: This was pretty nice. Interesting! And this was one of the entries that I actually liked, because of your descriptions. It was concise and precise, and it was good. Give us more of those entries!
Your entries are short, often, no more than three sentences!! I couldn�t really review you on your content because often, there was nothing to review about. In short, I was quite bored.
Content Score: 20/40
Layout: I like the layout. It�s done by Lucky Designs, and is a little plain, but that�s what I like about it. Your navigation is extremely organized; even your site meter looks good on the site. The scrollbar fits in perfectly, and it�s nice in it�s simplicity.
Layout Score: 15/20
Emotions: There were hardly any emotions in your diary. You only write about your daily life, about things that happened to you, and I couldn�t find an entry that gave me an idea about how you really feel.
Emotions Score: 4/20
Extras: Profile, rings, links, photos.
Extras Score: 8/10
Links: A working button.
Links Score: 5/5
Contacts: Notes, and email.
Contact Score: 2/5
Total Score: 54/100
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Favourite Entry: None
Favourite Quote: None
Comments: The quality of your writing in its content can be improved. In a few entries, you did show some of your talent in writing about things that are interesting and that can capture the heart of readers.
Reviewed by: Charlene