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Content: What an interesting title you have and I like your writing. It�s easy to understand, you don�t write too much but enough most of the time and it�s pretty enjoyable to read. In some entries, you just had only a quiz result or a few sentences about diary stuffs, which is okay but that�s not all we want to read. Readers want to know about what�s going on in your life and who you are as a person. This was good though. You�re right that is an interesting dream. And this entry shows you can really write well and tells a little something about what is happening in your life. (34/40).
Layout: Great job on designing the layout by yourself. You obviously know HTML and have made a button link to your site, as well as other things. I don�t know if it was my computer or what, but it always took a long time to load on your page and that really annoyed me. Grey tones for a layout aren�t my favorite color schemes, but the red spices it up a bit and the picture is a good size, with the words "speaker for the dead" in red written in a nice easy to read font. The navigation is okay, but not the best. Like, for example, I couldn�t find links to review sites at first and what to make of some titles. You asked how to have all the back entries have the same look as the new layout and for mine, I went in the edit/delete section and without changing anything, "edit" all entries that are not the same and it should work. (17/20).
Emotions: I didn�t detect a whole lot in this department, but there were some. When you wrote about your poetry or SARS, friends, etc and went in depth into the subjects, that was great. You could do that more. (10/20).
Extras: You have lot�s and lot�s. =) (12/10).
Link: Yes, I found it. (5/5).
Contact: Mail, chatterbox, and the guest book though hard to find if you don�t read entire entries (it�s at the bottom of each one). (4/5).
Total: 82/100.
EXTRA
Favorite Entry: Wow read this poem. The whole entry is really intense.
Favorite Quote: it was the poem that was unexpected: born of me, sitting in the middle of a tropical torrent and watching others get wet, and suddenly seeing lines of metaphors and threads of connections. and then i wrote the poem. it's written with more care over syntax than any other poem i've ever written--more structured towards a purpose, so to speak.
Comments: I really like the way you write, especially when it�s more than a few sentences. Keep it up! =)
Reviewed by Kathy