the space between us is as boundless as the dark
Content:
I hate how a lot of your entries are all in one paragraphs or have REALLY long paragraphs. It makes it hard to read, and it doesn�t really interest the reader. I know it may sound stupid, but people are more likely to read it if it doesn�t seem so long. So what you should do is just break it up in a few paragraphs so it�s easier to use.
Most of the time you talk about your day and as you know that is called a day log. Instead of just talking about your day, you should talk about how you felt that day or during certain parts of that day.
I love reading about your boyfriend and it�s good that you don�t ONLY talk about him. It gets quite annoying when someone�s diary is about one specific person.
Overall, I thought you had pretty good content. You have several run-ons here and there, but who doesn�t? Your grammar is a little choppy, but your interesting entries make it easier to follow. (35/40)
Layout: A simple layout thanks to Pixel Scripts. I like your quote on the top and the picture on the back of your links and entry. Although, there is a lot of space left, and it does look kind of boring. You should try to do something to lighten up the layout a little more. I also love how you organize your archive pages, very creative. (18/20)
Emotions: Some entries are about your days, and others are about something specific in which you show a lot of emotion in your writing.
In this entry you talk about not being able to survive without your boyfriend and giving your life for his. This shows how much you love him and how much you want to be with him. (18/20)
Extras: autobiography, photos, 101 facts� try a cast page. (7/10)
Link: It�s there. (5/5)
Contact: Guestbook, e-mail, notes� try adding Screen name or something. (3/5)
Total: (86/100)
Extra:
Favorite Entry: This was a creative poem.
Favorite Quote: "why she's secluded / amicable to the wood / the fear will never fade / gentle like it should"
Comments: Your entries are usually long, I like how you interact your emotions with your days sometimes. GOOD JOB!
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Reviewed by:: Thi