Hell-Grlie
Content: It�s a diary of a typical teenage girl. Your content was alright, although it got a little stale after a while because you wrote too much about boys. But I think I can understand that. After all, we�re girls right? I especially liked this entry because of it�s descriptions. And this was good too.
Content Score: 29/40
Layout: It�s a plain layout. I like it because of its simplicity. There aren�t any fancy stuff around here, but what�s good about the layout is that it�s organized and neat. I could find whatever I wanted in a glance. But you ought to put paragraph breaks while writing your diary. That way, it would be much easier to read.
Layout Score: 12/20
Emotions: You can be emotional at times. In fact, you can actually show more emotions in your writing, but you seem to refrain from doing so. This was very good for it showed a lot of your emotions, and the writing style was very good. Also, this showed your emotions very distinctly.
Emotions Score: 9/20
Extras: Profile. Do try to improve on that.
Extras Score: 2/10
Links: Links are working.
Links Score: 5/5
Contacts: Guestbook and email. Perhaps you could put the notes as well.
Contact Score: 3/5
Total Score: 60/100
Extras:
Favourite Entry: Something you wrote on paper
Favourite Quote: god, what a messed up world we live in.
Comments: If you develop your writing skills, you can actually be an interesting writer. The explicit descriptions shows that with a little more effort and time, your diary will be a big hit. I actually read your whole diary because of it's descriptions. Just keep up the work.
Reviewed by: Charlene