Jena Mae's Personal Diary
Content: Well you certainly don't update often, which is a pain but since there are so few entries, I was able to read each one of them. You had some grammar errors, but maybe they're just fast typing mistakes (I don't think so though). You wrote a lot about church, guys in general, etc. It's great that you're so into church, but you're surface when you write about it. I want to hear about the inner feelings! Also, all your entries are pretty short, which is okay but I wanted more. I kept expecting more. If more entries were like this the diary content would be so much better. (20/40).
Layout: This design is by Magelet. It's not the best title name you have, but I like how you have it surrounded by pinkish red dots. I think the red and pink colors look good together and the flowers are cute but a bit too much. (15/20).
Emotions: You write about what happens to you or an event that you go through during your day and while this can be good, you could add a lot more feeling, depth and emotion. Like in this entry, you could've gotten into it so much more, telling us what was felt inside, what was God doing?! I'm so sorry you had to go through this. Overall, though, you don't go a lot into your emotions. You write something then never really reflect on it. (8/20).
Extras: Quizzes, rings, reviews, others, clicks, diaries you read, .. A good start. (8/10).
Link: Yes you used a button. (5/5).
Contact: Guestbook, email, notes? But the contact link is just black and sitting there. (5/5).
Total: 61/100.
EXTRA
Favorite Entry: Again, this was good.
Favorite Quote: Anyway, I always wonder why people nowadays don't seem to care what would happen on the future. They enjoy the present.. though I don't argue with that...sometimes they seem to live on the past, but still they don't care about their soul.
Comments: If you just took more time in your entries, opened up more...
Reviewed by Kathy