My Summer has arrived // Luna
Content: You have so much emotion, it's draining to read sometimes but that only means that you get the reader into what you write and make them want to keep reading. I haven't had this feeling for a diary in a long time. It's awesome that you can make layouts; wish I knew enough HTML to do that. I really like that you go into detail about your feelings and it's good that you don't have a set writing style just yet. You're finding your writer's voice and that can change with every little change in you. I agree that each individual is their own worst critic because I often don't think my writing is that good either. Wait, you were only 10 years old when you wrote that fan fiction? That flamer should cut you some slack! And now you're just 14... The writing I've read you sound so much older and yes, mature. And my, you're certainly taking advanced sounding classes for your age. Good for you! Wow, you certainly hate Aki, as repeated over and over again here. I'm sorry you feel that way, I would have liked it if you could have gone more in depth into why you felt that way; what she did or said. Oops, read more about it here. It's well written, but so bitter and hateful. I guess I can't blame you though. I've had something like that happen to me in the past when I was younger too and though it wasn't as deep as your hurt, I remember the feelings. (38/40).
Layout: This one's by Graphic Heaven. Ooh, it's really pretty! The colors: oranges, yellow and green though not my favorite mesh extremely well together and the picture of the anime sweetheart is lovely and gives it a nice feeling. I don't really like the grids behind it though. And most everything is organized neatly. =) One thing though, the link to Profile doesn't work. . . Maybe you should make it so that past entries are the same as the current layout? (19/20).
Emotions: Wow, there's certainly a lot of emotion within your entries. And I think you should say what you want in your diary, even if many won't understand because a diary is your place to pour out all your feelings and thoughts, no matter if they make no sense to the next person. Almost every entry is filled with something, a feeling that's nagging you or bothering you that day and it's great to read. But I was sorry to hear that you felt so down on yourself, like about being a failure, etc. I can't tell you not to feel that way, because I've felt that before too and it weighs us down but I hope eventually, we can all figure out that we don't have to do everything. There's so much sadness and pain behind some of the entries... But I'm very glad that once the layout changes to the more summery feel, so do your thoughts. (20/20).
Extras: Cast, rings, dreams, favorite entries, buddies, personal links, official/favorite links, and soundtrack is pending! (9/10).
Link Yes, it~{!/~}s there. (5/5).
Contact: Email, Notes, Guestbook, Guest map (5/5).
Total: 96/100.
EXTRA
Favorite Entry: I liked a lot of them.
Favorite Quote: Everyone in your life can be compared to the stiches in a tapestry. They're all important, and they're all woven in by you. You make the picture, but you use them to make it.
And this one was incredible:
And in that moment you see a flicker of hope in those perverted eyes, for some kind of romance, some typical bollywood first-love kind of thing. He doesn't care who you are, or about your physical appearance, he just want some kind of indication that you are 'the one' (for his fantasy) and if you stagger your gaze or look away shyly he will smile at you, turning away in slow motion so that you can see all the dazzling nits and lice fall out of his hair and onto his bright orange, classically sportish car (i.e. one that has obviously been used in many violent sports that have lead to its... err... beautification).
Comments: I truly enjoyed looking through your diary and the writing was excellent. Keep up the great work. I found myself wanting to read more of your entries, when I got to the last one. And the new layout you now have is the best. =)
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Reviewed by Kathy