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Content: It isn�t often I encounter such an honest diary. You seem to be very open about your sexuality and you aren�t embarrassed about it. This is really good. But you write far too much about sex and related topics that after a while, I seriously got bored. There was nothing in which was interesting and you should vary your topics more. You concentrate too much on your daily life; your diary has become too much of a daily ramble that readers naturally become bored. This can seriously be improved.

Content Score: 20/40

Layout: A layout done by pixie designs. It isn�t too bad, but it just isn�t the kind of layout I�d like. The navigation is organized but is far too long. On the whole, I didn�t really like the layout.

Layout Score: 9/20

Emotions: I read a lot of your entries, but none of them strike me as emotional. You do not really express your feelings in words, but when you write, usually you seem to be rather enthusiastic.

Emotions Score: 4/20

Extras: Plenty of extras.

Extras Score: 15/10

Links: A working text link.

Links Score: 5/5

Contacts: Guestbook, email, notes, and AIM.

Contact Score: 4/5

Total Score: 57/100

Extras:

Favourite Entry: None

Favourite Quote: Things aren't ever going to be perfect, but who ever said perfection was all it's cracked up to be?

Comments: Your diary can do with a lot of improvement, especially where the topics of your writing are concern. Try to make your ramblings more interesting to capture readers from the online world.

Reviewed by: Charlene

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