Paradise
Content: This diary is mainly about your school life. I started with the later entries and they were all about your school life and I got bored after a while. Try to vary your topics of writing more. You can have more school-life entries, since you are in school, but it is generally better if you write about things that people can relate to, and things that generally interest people. Also, include more descriptions in your narration about your school life.
There isn�t much I can say about your content; it gets a little dull after a while.
Content Score: 20/40
Layout: Quite a nice layout by blah-design. The image is really nice, and the navigation is user friendly as well. However, the image really takes up too much place, that your writing is hidden behind the shadows. Perhaps you can reduce the size of the image; allow readers to focus more on your diary than your layout. I think that would have been better. Also, there�s a slight problem with your rings page and archives page. Perhaps you should check that out too.
Layout Score: 12/20
Emotions: This entry described your anger towards your mother. It was one of the rare entries that expressed your emotions, and give us more entries of that kind!!
Emotions Score: 5/20
Extras: Rings, profile, surveys, and friends.
Extras Score: 8/10
Links: No link.
Links Score: 0/5
Contacts: Guestbook and notes.
Contact Score: 2/5
Total Score: 47/100
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Favourite Entry: None
Favourite Quote: None
Comments: I couldn�t get into your diary. I couldn�t get into your world and know you better through your diary. Include more entries of the change you are undergoing, of the path your are now walking through, and of your life as a person on Earth. This will allow readers to understand you much better.
Reviewed by: Charlene