orange peelings
CONTENT: Your entries are very long, which is fine because you had me interested enough to read them all the way to the bottom. You are a very good writer, relaying your day with details without getting too boring. I chuckled at a few of your entries, and was drawn into your more serious ones as well. It was easy for me to read and comprehend your writings; partially because you have a lot of interesting things to say, and also because I think we have the same kind of writing style and technique. (40/40)
LAYOUT: Whoa your template is busy! I had to blink a few times at first to take it all in. I like oranges and the color orange so that�s a plus, but some of the things that you have right in your diary should be put onto separate pages with links to them, like the Reads and Disclaimer and maybe the This is Me. Your entries are long and since the area for your entries is a thin column, it makes the pages long with too much scrolling. Also, it would be helpful to have the �next� and �previous� links at the bottom of your entries, so that the reader doesn�t have to scroll all the way back up just to click the link to your next entry. Other than that, your template looks fun and cheery, but it�s just a little too much to take in. (10/20)
EMOTIONS: Emotions in every entry. Happy, sad, frustrated, everything. I could tell exactly what you were feeling because you conveyed it so well. Awesome job. (23/20)
EXTRAS: Reads, 101 things, wow and you even have your own layout site! Very cool. Perhaps the addition of rings or quizzes would help. (8/10)
LINK: It�s there and it works fine. (5/5)
CONTACT: Guestbook, e-mail, aim, notes, zonkboard, guestmap�wow lots of ways to contact you! (6/5)
TOTAL SCORE: 92/100
Fave Entry: this one, if I had to choose. It has both humor and emotion in it, and was the first entry I read.
Fave Quote: From my fave entry: "seriously, mom, why don't you just have an orgasm and get it over with?"
Comments: I very much enjoyed reading your diary. You have a mature heart and mind for someone of your age, and I admire it very much. Keep writing; I�ll be back.
P.S. It�s very rare that you find a person who is real and not fake. I can relate to your concern about that, and though it takes a while, find people who are real and never let them go. You seem like a person who is real through and through, but if you surround yourself with positive influences in your life, you�ll find that even you will notice how you�re letting yourself become yourself even more. (Hope that made some sense lol).
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Reviewed by: Linda