it�s the slacker lifestyle that we do so well
Content:
I hate the way you don�t put spaces after your period and commas. You don�t even bother to capitalize the new sentences. It�s so confusing. Your grammar ruins the mood of your sentence.
Some of your entries are so pointless� like this one. What was the point? You shouldn�t even have wasted a whole entry on it.
You have no real style of writing. All you do is ramble on and on about your day. When you first started everything was so short, about one or two sentences of random thoughts in your head. I think it�s all quote boring and annoying to read.
You have many skips and not many multiples. (15/40)
Layout: I like yoir current layout. I don�t quite know who it�s by. It�s by someone by the name of slacker. I hate the way you don�t have a previous nor a next button. Going back and forth to the older pages is quite a hassle and quite annoying. You also have many older layouts which you should update to yours right now. (15/20)
Emotions: you usually just talk about your day. It�s quite boring and you show no sign of emotions. Once or twice you may stay your thoughts about things but it�s very rare. (10/20)
Extras: rings, surveys, play list, etc. (10/10)
Link: It�s there. (5/5)
Contact:Aim, e-mail, notes (3/5)
Total: (58/100)
Extra:
Favorite Entry: This was in interesting entry that really caught my attention.
Favorite Quote: " i've always known this,but realized not to let your days pass you by,because you'll be dead sooner than later.so i hope you realize this too..to think outside your little world and stop complaining for my sake. "Good job for realizing what you�ve realized.
Comments: You live like an average person. Stay yourself but try to change your writing style.
Reviewed by:: Thi