Precious One's Journal
Content: A lot of your entries are just about your day and don't go deeper than that, but this one was different. I really enjoyed the first few paragraphs because they showed more of who you are, how you think, and gives us an idea of your opinions and such. The thing you wrote for closing chapel was really nicely said and thought out. Some of your entries are one long paragraph and that didn't make me want to read it more. So remember to use paragraph breaks-- I know you know how to do that because you use it liberally in other entries. It's just better to separate different topics and it's easier on the eyes. I like it better when you just write about whatever's on your mind and expand on it, kind of like here. I liked ideas here even though they weren't written by you.. It's good you put it in your journal. (30/40)
Layout: Well, it's pretty plain.. All it is a blue background (nice looking though) with darker blue words and links at the bottom. I think you should move prev and next entry links so they're next to each other and more easy to access. I like the color of the line underlining entry title and date but there's not much going on. You can get a new layout that speaks for your personality more at Beautify. It has some for diary-x memvers too. (8/20)
Emotions: Sometimes when you daydreamed and put what you're feeling, it was plenty and wonderful but I couldn't find many entries like that. (8/20)
Extras: Not many at all.. Link to your other diary, another link. You have a lot of quotes and song lyrics so maybe make a thing for that and a bio/cast ... (1/10)
Link: Well, there's a link to us on an entry but not on template. (4/5)
Contact: Only guestbook. (2/5)
Total: (53/100)Extra:Favorite Entry Definitely this one I know I've thought about that too.
Favorite Quote:
Comments:
Reviewed by Kathy