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springfever

You make my heart smile.

Content: Your diary is mainly about the changes you undergo in your life, especially when you move. This about the blackout was really nice. I like it when you quote quotes that people say.

You have a way of writing things in a way that makes it sound interesting, but while it has its amusing bits of rambles, it becomes too much of an everyday-life-diary, and of course, after a while, it gets awfully boring.

Content Score: 25/40

Layout: The layout is by Stundesigns. I like the colour of the navigation. It�s really nice how the title of the entry is at the bottom of the page. Also, your navigation bar is very user friendly and is quite organized. You can actually create a page especially for contacts. I would prefer the background of your entries to be the same colour. It isn�t so nice when it is white, but basically, the layout is okay.

Layout Score: 11/20

Emotions: You don�t really describe your emotions in this diary. Sure, there is an imood link, and I can tell what you feel that day, but in your entries, I cannot feel what you are feeling. You don�t really express yourself in your diary.

Emotions Score: 4/20

Extras: Profile, bio, extras, links, rings. Plenty!

Extras Score: 12/10

Links: A working button link.

Links Score: 5/5

Contacts: Tagboard, email, guestbook, and notes.

Contact Score: 4/5

Total Score: 61/100

Extras:

Favourite Entry: None.

Favourite Quote: And I can't help working hard either, I WANT to do the best I can in this life not just paddle around aimlessly in the river.

Comments: While it is nice to hear about the ramblings of your daily life, you need more substantial stuff in your diary. Try writing about things that you believe in, about things that you treasure, about things that are closest to your heart. You can elaborate more on the emotions you feel after you moved. Perhaps your homesickness, or your joy. In short, you can really improve your diary.

Reviewed by: Charlene

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