It's never enough
Content: Day to day events, that's what you mainly use this diary for....but you tell how you feel about those things. You dont' just list them you stay on a topic and tell how you feel about it. You don't use a lot of emotion on all your entries but when you go deep you go deep. Most of them are short and sort of boring. You don't put much depth into them. I hate to give you a bad score because I know you are a good writer you have found the voice and you know how to use it....you just don't use it all the time. You write about interesting things and such you just don't go into great detail. Some of them were so great to read and other's weren't. Keep working at it and the writing will come to you easily.
When you write you write about interesting stuff and that's what made your diary appealing to me and that's why I like it. You dont' usually write about everyday things but you add some "flare" or something special to it. I like it! Just go deeper. (30/40)
Layout: This is a very cute layout. Simple and cute. I love the fish and the colors go so well. I think the navigation font and the entry font should be the same, but other than that...I don't see any broken links and you have a link to the designer. Awesome.
Oh and please please please learn how to archive your older entries!! It makes the diary look nicer on the older page, it's not hard. If you have questions just ask me about it and I would be glad to help. (15/20)
Emotions: You do use emotion...Like in this one, there was so much going on. It was a well written entry and it was purley emotion. Others, like this one just say your happy, but not really in depth. I know you can write very deeply and make it very interesting to read...you just aren't some of the time. (15/20)
Extras: Tons!! Cast, Rings, Reviews, Bio, everything!! (15/10)
Link: Yep, our cute little button :) (5/5)
Contact: Notes, E-mail, Guestbook. The usual, you could try getting a TagBoard....those things are great! But I won't count off. (5/5)
TOTAL SCORE: 85/100
Fave Entry: This was very funny!
Fave Quote: "In life, and love there are no coincidences."
Comments: Keep writing, you'll get deeper and deeper everytime you write. You can be an awesome writer you just can't give up. ; )
You are able to join the SWEET SILVER Diary Ring!!
Reviewed by Lyndsey