the more you live... the more you learn how to deal...
Content: The content of your diary mainly consists of the details of your daily life, which are sometimes interesting, for you tell people a lot about yourself. Your topics vary from friendship, to spiders, to 30 things, and to what you want to do. This provides a variety of topics, but at the same time, there is a need for you to vary your content, meaning that because it is an online diary, and people are reading it, you should write, at times, also for your readers.
However, I like the way you start your diary entries with lyrics. It made the entire journal interesting, and as though the lyrics symbolize some of your thoughts, it�s a good way to begin an entry. This was good.
Content Score: 30/40
Layout: The layout is based on the movie. It�s quite nice, thanks to Outtatune Designs. The layout is very sweet, but I think it takes up too much of the page.
Layout Score: 13/20
Emotions: In this entry, you talked about three very extreme emotions. But mainly, your diary didn�t really involved your emotions, but rather details about your daily life.
Emotions Score: 8/20
Extras: Profile, bio, extras, cast, pictures, reviews, Friday Five, you have ever so many.
Extras Score: 12/10
Links: The links are working.
Links Score:5/5
Contacts: Guestbook, AIM, yahoo messenger and notes.
Contact Score: 4/5
Total Score: 72/100
Extras:
Favourite Entry: This entry.
Favourite Quote: Hiccups are a creation from the devil. That was real funny.
Comments: I see you really want to write. But with real good writing, there should be more descriptions and emotive writing. Only through that that a reader�s attention can be captured.
Reviewed by: Charlene