happiness is bliss
Content: You do a fairly good job in explaining/telling what�s going on in your life. I like the poem you wrote in here. It�s cool how you put a whole conversation in this entry and others, but you should also write about your emotions about each one. I think you write in a colloquial style, saying what you think and it�s good, but I like it best when you put in your poems. They�re well written, beautiful and the words flow together. You do well with dialogue too. (37/40).
Layout: I�ve seen this layout by Lissy and it�s pretty good. It�s bright and colorful. I love how there�s a definition of Bliss at the bottom and it�s easy to navigate. The font for Bliss fits; I just don�t like the yellow scroll-bars� Don�t know why! Cute how you have a birthday counter! I�m not sure when it is, but I wish you a Happy Birthday! =) (19/20).
Emotions: You�ve got some emotions, especially in your poetry. You could expand more on your feelings, like when you�re happy or confused or whatever. (15/20).
Extras: Not too many. You should put in your poems, quizzes, anything else you want. Right now you only have the basics� Diary Rings and Cast. I think that you should separate the people in your cast list� Put a paragraph break between each different person�s name so it�ll be easier to read. (Ooh, I love Clay too!=) (4/10).
Link: I looked but couldn�t find the sweetreviews link. Sorry. (0/5).
Contact: Yup, you have a separate section for that. (5/5).
Total: 80/100.
Extra:
Favorite Entry: I liked this one because I like how you realize you will be able to go through life, whatever it gives you.
Favorite Quote: i want to be loved by you alone
please let me know if you love me
i cannot bear to shed another tear
upon this glorious face at all
i miss you.... i want to know you love me
and i can't help thinking a part of me is gone
you took the words right out of my mouth and God is saving me from your endless hurt
Comments: I loved reading all your poetry and the layout was great!
You are able to apply to the SILVER RING! =)
Reviewed By Kathy