Rereview
feel the breeze.
Content: The first entries I read almost bored me. You just told about your day and didn't really put much emotion or anything in them. But your content is good. You have a few spelling and grammar mistakes. You don't capitalize...but that's fine. You're entries vary on length. Sometimes they are long, sometimes they are short. Your entries can be interesting though. You go into depth on how you felt in some entries and really explained things. My older sister has a greyhound, they are great dogs! That's great you are getting one!! They are such pretty dogs. I like how at the end of all your entries you put "it's been real". It's just sort of funny to me. Makes your diary your own though, that's always nice. There are different levels in your diary. There are certain entries were you seem so happy and then there are entries were you seem so sad. It's a good mixture and it made your diary really interesting. I know that you have great potential to really write how you feel. If you don't want to write like that because maybe your parents don't read it. That's all I can say though. I would try writing more with yourself and not really caring what other people say about your diary. You could lock it so your parents couldn't read it...just an idea though. You have potential to write more in depth..try it out. I know you have a good diary and I still like the content! Nice job~
Content Score: 33/40
Layout: This layout is so funny. I've always thought that this was a really funny layout. Everything is really organized and neat. The colors go good together and the picture is hillarious. You should archive your older entries. It makes everything look a lot better. The %% buddy list %% isn't working on your older page either. Don't put a space inbetween buddy and list and I think it will work. There aren't any broken links and everything else looks really good. Layout Credit: Diva Designs.
Layout Score: 17/20
Emotions: You do use emotions, but you could use more. I know that they are in there...they just haven't come out yet. You have to find your writer's voice and that takes time with everyone. Maybe you don't want this diary to be a emotional diary or anything. You could try writing them down and then later put them on the diary. Just work on letting everything out, don't care what other people think. It's your diary!!
Emotions Score: 10/20
Extras: Cast, rings, reviews, a little "about me", and buddy list.
Extras Score: 12/10
Link: The link to your old review is there, so yup...you have one!
Link Score: 5/5
Contact: AIM, book, and notes.
Contact Score: 5/5
Total Score: 82/100 You can join the Sweet Silver Diary Ring.
Extras:
Favourite Entry: Couldn't find one.
Favourite Quote: "two fenderbenders and a soggy borrito later and im home."
Comments: You still have great potential. It's still there it just hasn't all come out. Your emotion level in the diary has stayed the same from the last time I reviewed you. That's all I can say. You have a great diary here just don't be afraid to really express youreself. That's what they are for and it's your diary. It's what you think about it that matters!! Good luck
Reviewed by: Lyndsey